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Comic 22 - Friend Issues

9th Oct 2010, 2:52 AM
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Friend Issues
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El Zorrito 9th Oct 2010, 2:52 AM edit delete
El Zorrito
Dont blame me for the late update, it was told of up front and had filler for the dalay so, no problems i suppose.
And here comes the question with no answer XP:
Can anybody tell me what is missing in my serial? PLEASE answer this one cause i wanna fix my work but i cant get fixing tips from my point of view, how about you, can you tell if something is missing or needs to improve?

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Robotwin.com 9th Oct 2010, 4:09 AM edit delete
Robotwin.com
Your drawings are good and funny! I guess you can improve on your lettering and spelling. For example, panel 4, "syste" must be spelled system, and "your" must be spelled you're.
El Zorrito 9th Oct 2010, 4:36 AM edit delete
El Zorrito
thamks! anything else?
Dracolicoi 9th Oct 2010, 12:34 PM edit delete
Dracolicoi
Hahaha!!! nice expresion in the last panel from Pucho!! I love it!
technogrannie, joyjoy 11th Oct 2010, 5:10 AM edit delete
I give this one a thumbs up.....and time to hide the catnip....no brain dead zombies allowed....great work....keeps getting better....
Drakara 9th Jan 2016, 6:15 PM edit delete
5...4...3...2...1...
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