Dont blame me for the late update, it was told of up front and had filler for the dalay so, no problems i suppose.
And here comes the question with no answer XP:
Can anybody tell me what is missing in my serial? PLEASE answer this one cause i wanna fix my work but i cant get fixing tips from my point of view, how about you, can you tell if something is missing or needs to improve?
Your drawings are good and funny! I guess you can improve on your lettering and spelling. For example, panel 4, "syste" must be spelled system, and "your" must be spelled you're.
And here comes the question with no answer XP:
Can anybody tell me what is missing in my serial? PLEASE answer this one cause i wanna fix my work but i cant get fixing tips from my point of view, how about you, can you tell if something is missing or needs to improve?