Hellows my cookies!
Now I did as I was commanded and
delivered a much petitioned strip,
a Pervy and Nelly stupid sexy
moment. Ya know, this the second time
I had to draw one of the girls half
naked, and the results now kinda
make me feel proud, for I did take
some anatomy drawing classes in
collage and know a bit more of the
female anatomy.
So, what do ya think?
Also, Answer me this, Is there
hope for these two ending up
together at all?
I support the Tri message, girls use to wear bra because... ask your lady
well about the practice the females are fificult. I used to have problem drawing them, that is why now I practice them a lot.
humm they do a good couple, but that depends of you
while I do not, in all honestly, object to topless women, Tri is right; Nelly ought to be in a bra. Actually, given her size, the fact that she likes to run and gun, and her job in the boiler room, where she is a) quite active, and b)likely to take her top off, due to heat, she really ought to be in a sports bra (the ones that look like mini-tank tops with built in support). Trust me, sudden unsupported motion can Hurt!
As to these two together...hm. Okay - you've hinted, by way of 'cubbi, that the two could work out...though the hurdles are pretty big.
I'd like to see them both happy. I'm just not sure that they would end up that way going together. If Nelly enters into that relationship on anything other than her own freely chosen terms, it will either end in heartache, or fall apart immediately, and she'll never trust Pervy again - at least, that's my read of the character.
I'm tentatively for the relationship going in a romantic direction, but, proceed with caution, because this will be something that is really easy to mess up, fall into cliche, or betray the characterization. Step with care, author, for there be dragons here, and fog.
Well, we all know what that succubus said about Nelly-oh and a certain Blueberry... Hehe. I predict that Pervy and Nelly-oh are going to fall into an accidental bonding moment, or that Pervy will pull another "hospital" trick.
all in all........i have to agree with that. pervy needs to tone it down though but i think nelly needs to learn something else.......i can't put my finger on it though. not being a stuck up b word wouldn't help though. she's being varry tolorent with pervy as it is.
Oh I forgot to mention... thanks for the direction arrows! And the way you put the panals the flow of the comic was readable without the arrows. Good work doing that. a lot of people who try to change the format end up with a fairly confusing page.
If you keep that up, Pervy, you're going to have permanent brain trauma. It almost looks like the top of his head got cut off.
As for a Pervy/Nelly relationship, if he turns down the act and they both actually talk to each other, I think it could work out.
female anatomy" Yet no bra? Ask your girly if she'd do any adventuring without one.
These two getting together? Yep, Pervy would need to tone down his ... well all of him. Then maybe he risks his life fore Nelly?
well about the practice the females are fificult. I used to have problem drawing them, that is why now I practice them a lot.
humm they do a good couple, but that depends of you
As to these two together...hm. Okay - you've hinted, by way of 'cubbi, that the two could work out...though the hurdles are pretty big.
I'd like to see them both happy. I'm just not sure that they would end up that way going together. If Nelly enters into that relationship on anything other than her own freely chosen terms, it will either end in heartache, or fall apart immediately, and she'll never trust Pervy again - at least, that's my read of the character.
I'm tentatively for the relationship going in a romantic direction, but, proceed with caution, because this will be something that is really easy to mess up, fall into cliche, or betray the characterization. Step with care, author, for there be dragons here, and fog.
As for a Pervy/Nelly relationship, if he turns down the act and they both actually talk to each other, I think it could work out.